Om! vibes on the Water lip: Dedicated to my 'body doubles', a.k.a., duos-in-perfect-positive-correlation

Om! vibes on the water lip - Love, Life & Lamborghini...no, well, err...laugh!
Welcome to my ‘Jam Pad’ – the only place where chock-a-blocks are appreciated!

Not that I create music here; but I shall try all I can to jazz you up; pop a couple of novice, jest-for-pun words to rock you out of your sanity; scratch the blues out of the mind, kicking to life the RIP rust lying there to bend you in the middle, one way or the other; and rap my invisible pen’s madcap toe in a desperate attempt to somehow touch a chord or two. All, in a hip hop with the tide of words that sometimes seeps on to the shore of my mind and sometimes in its grand elusiveness, flows back to its haven. Nevertheless, i shall go on relentlessly like the waves, inspired by the echoes of Om that mirrors Oneness.

Monday, February 18, 2008

Dedicated to my 'body doubles', a.k.a., duos-in-perfect-positive-correlation

Prompt: A poem based on 'ode to the body'

Loyal couples on my body
So near, yet so far
from each other; even so
growing or getting smaller in happy duets
with nothing to choose between them
their sync keeps me ‘poised’ too!

* I am so glad that our hands, legs...get bigger or smaller in exactly similar proportions. Dare to imagine otherwise?! :)

7 comments:

gautami tripathy said...: I like the ode for the pairings..

:D

ode for convoluted crevices; February 19, 2008 at 5:04 AM
anthonynorth said...: And a perfectly positive poem, too.; February 19, 2008 at 7:43 AM
Linda Jacobs said...: I've always taken this concept for granted. Thanks for pointing it out. I like it!; February 19, 2008 at 1:21 PM
chicklegirl said...: I'm a sucker for symmetry, so I loved your take on this prompt. I thought the first line was especially nicely done!; February 19, 2008 at 3:41 PM
Whitesnake said...: I enjoyed this; February 19, 2008 at 10:08 PM
Andy Sewina said...: Yeah! but don't tell the Orangutans that!; February 20, 2008 at 7:06 AM
Deb said...: I like the body within the body idea. Well done.

(Pitty my poor nose that is growing more like my grandmothers. What was once petite...now just small. Ears, too.); February 20, 2008 at 1:03 PM