Om! vibes on the water lip - Love, Life & Lamborghini...no, well, err...laugh!
Welcome to my ‘Jam Pad’ – the only place where chock-a-blocks are appreciated!
Not that I create music here; but I shall try all I can to jazz you up; pop a couple of novice, jest-for-pun words to rock you out of your sanity; scratch the blues out of the mind, kicking to life the RIP rust lying there to bend you in the middle, one way or the other; and rap my invisible pen’s madcap toe in a desperate attempt to somehow touch a chord or two. All, in a hip hop with the tide of words that sometimes seeps on to the shore of my mind and sometimes in its grand elusiveness, flows back to its haven. Nevertheless, i shall go on relentlessly like the waves, inspired by the echoes of Om that mirrors Oneness.
4 comments:
i.love.this.
I like the way this builds up to the new beginning from 'cracking the chill' and the 'ball of fire rising inside us'.
This does build very nicely to "as One." I live the vibe, the way the words built on each other.
One small nit-picky thing - I think I would have used the word cracked instead of cracking. Never have been a fan of -ing endings. See what you think.
Touche, ThomG. Thank you! :)
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